INITIAL IDEA PITCH

FEEDBACK:

I presented my pitch presentation to my class, but there has been a problem with the video, therefore I cannot upload it. I remember the feedback they gave me, therefore I have made improvements.

• The initial idea for my title was “Me and me”. A classmate advised me to change it to “Me and I” as before it sounded too repetitive. Due to this feedback, now the name of my film is “Me and I”. It perfectly gets the audience into the mood before seeing the film, and foreshadows the character's mental illness.

• They told me that the whole story line might not fit in only 2 minutes, therefore I have reduced the first part when the protagonist is preparing dinner. This will make the audience focus more on the murder Thana commits, rather than the introductory part.

• An important piece of advice my teacher gave me that I will take into account is the timing. It might be quite difficult to film the second part of the film during night time. This is because you need special lighting in order to allow the character to be seen. I will try filming it around 7:00 PM as it is dark, but some light can still be seen, allowing me to use less lighting sources.